Can you remember any exciting words and phrases that you heard in today's lesson? Or maybe you could add some more in the comments below? There may be house points involved for excellent contributors...
Today, we watched a short clip of a movie to inspire us with some excellent vocabulary. We're going to be writing stories based on the clip.
Can you remember any exciting words and phrases that you heard in today's lesson? Or maybe you could add some more in the comments below? There may be house points involved for excellent contributors...
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Zainab N
3/11/2015 03:13:22 pm
For the rainforest you could have picturesque and beautiful scenery.
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Mr Sharrock
10/11/2015 01:21:44 pm
Fantastic suggestions! Great spellings, too! 5 house points!
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Madiha
4/11/2015 07:48:27 am
Leaves swishing like they are whispering to each other.
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Mr Sharrock
10/11/2015 01:21:07 pm
I like these descriptive phrases, well done Madiha! 5 house points!
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danyal
4/11/2015 08:52:46 pm
I would describe the egg as peculiar and out of this world.
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danyal
4/11/2015 08:57:27 pm
the jungle was as huge as Mount. Everast. I have enoyed learning about it.
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Mr Sharrock
10/11/2015 01:22:39 pm
I'm glad you've enjoyed it Danyal! Yes, we will be.
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Arfi
8/11/2015 09:46:57 pm
Hi Mr Sharrock its me Arfi
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:25:11 pm
Hello Arfi! I hope you are well!
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Heena
9/11/2015 08:27:37 pm
At the corner of the eye i saw a perculiar ,rusty and hazal blue eyes and then i relised it was an myesterios dinsour .Feeling apprehensive i turened arouned to show my short-tempure father .
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Mr Sharrock
10/11/2015 01:23:23 pm
Thanks for having a go at using some brilliant adjectives Heena! Come and see me as soon as you read this and we'll have a go at improving it together!
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Ibrahim
18/11/2015 02:21:05 pm
I really liked the movie (dinosaur) thank you sir :)
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:25:42 pm
You are very welcome. It seemed to really help you with your writing ideas, too!
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Basharat
18/11/2015 02:25:24 pm
I like it when we made our own dinosaur story in big write.😇
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Zubair
18/11/2015 02:25:54 pm
I like the clip you showed us sir and I have also seen the movie.
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Gunay
18/11/2015 02:26:49 pm
I wonder what will happen in the end,can't wait to find out. :)
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Samir
18/11/2015 02:27:52 pm
I liked writing about the dinosaur clip I hope our class does that again. :)
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Sanaa
18/11/2015 02:28:50 pm
I loved doing the big write because my favourite animal a (lemur)was in it not just because of that it is also because of I can show of my amazing writing.
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Junaid
18/11/2015 02:43:14 pm
This is probably my favoroit bigwrite because I could let my imagination go wild and I had so many ideas. I could really use my targets well on this bigwrite and I want to say thank you to mr Sharrok for ogernising it. I'm shure I am not the only one who loved it.
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Uzair
18/11/2015 05:53:36 pm
I like the mysterious egg it is quite interesting
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Saihaan and Houd
24/11/2015 11:14:29 am
I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Sharull
24/11/2015 11:38:56 am
I like misterious movies so loved to do that Big write
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Basharat
27/11/2015 10:37:29 am
I͙ l͙i͙k͙e͙d͙ i͙t͙ w͙h͙e͙n͙ w͙e͙ h͙a͙v͙e͙ t͙o͙ b͙e͙ c͙r͙e͙a͙t͙i͙v͙e͙ a͙n͙d͙ m͙a͙k͙e͙ u͙p͙ o͙u͙r͙ o͙w͙n͙ s͙t͙o͙r͙y͙ b͙u͙t͙ t͙h͙e͙ r͙e͙a͙l͙ v͙e͙r͙s͙i͙o͙n͙ w͙a͙s͙ g͙o͙o͙d͙.
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