Can you list some of your favourite magpied phrases below?
To help us with our writing, we have been 'stealing' words from a spooky setting description. I'm looking forward to seeing your phrases in tomorrow's big writing task.
Can you list some of your favourite magpied phrases below?
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Basharat and Sanna
18/11/2015 02:30:13 pm
My best phrase is snaked through the woods.
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:36:08 pm
Why do you think the writer used 'snaked'?
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Gunay
18/11/2015 02:30:53 pm
Probably 'dark' I guess dripping with horror spreading with darkness.
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:36:24 pm
Excellent! Very creepy!
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Uways
18/11/2015 02:32:47 pm
My phrase is: The tree was covered in fungus and was shaped is a folk.
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:35:54 pm
I think there might be a couple of spelling mistakes at the end of this Uways. Have another look and leave another comment...
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FAREED
18/11/2015 02:32:57 pm
Walking slowly, in the distance I saw a humangus old house the trees were as big as the biggest building in the world couldn't imagine what was in the house spider webs ghosts what can it be...
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:36:41 pm
Very imaginative!
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Ibrahim
18/11/2015 02:33:35 pm
I really liked the book you gave me it's as scary as monster thank you sir :) and I liked the leasson you planned I hope we can do that leasson again thank you sir :).
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Zainab
18/11/2015 02:34:04 pm
When I saw the forest it was like my heart was being munched away. The branches were almost sticking together and I don't know if it my imagination but I could hear evil laughing and thoughts in my head like " turn back or else..."
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:35:08 pm
How creepy!
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:34:21 pm
Great words and phrases! Keep them coming!
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Shahzad
18/11/2015 02:34:38 pm
It was a memorial stone on which a headless Angel hung
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:37:01 pm
I LOVE THIS! Definitely use it in your writing!
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Basharat and Sanna
18/11/2015 02:35:01 pm
My favourite phrase is the slow brown water .
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:39:51 pm
Great simile at the end.
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Junaid
18/11/2015 02:35:33 pm
Headless angle
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:38:09 pm
These are fantastic. Just have a look at your spellings on the first one. Headless angle...?
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Samir
18/11/2015 02:35:41 pm
The sinister,dark,gloomy house slowly grow bigger and uglier in the narrow winding streets.
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:39:13 pm
Samir, this is super-impressive. Don't forget to use this in your big writing tomorrow.
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Hadiyah
18/11/2015 02:35:49 pm
Spirits lurking around.
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:38:48 pm
Realm of evil! That's brilliant! Well done!
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Abdullah
18/11/2015 02:36:55 pm
As it snaked through the woods
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Houd
18/11/2015 02:37:01 pm
My legs trembled as I heard a spooky deafening scream.
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:38:27 pm
Great!
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Gunay
18/11/2015 02:37:55 pm
Headless Angel hung up over him his face trembled
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:41:36 pm
Creep-tastic!
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Faheem
18/11/2015 02:38:04 pm
My phrase is:the trees snaked through the forest and the river was eating its way through the soil the ancient history of this river says in the history it had met some hidden rocks in the river and snapped it into two. There was a memorial stone which a headless Angel and hung its robes like a huge and ugly tree fungus the ash was filled with fender and the cobwebs hung in dusty droops of beam. This is mine and I hoped you liked it 😂😂😂😎
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:40:59 pm
Liked it? Faheem, I loved it! Brilliant word choices.
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Basharat and Sanna
18/11/2015 02:38:22 pm
My favourite phrase is
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Houd
18/11/2015 02:38:56 pm
My body stood still with fear.
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:41:13 pm
Great phrase!
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Qaalid
18/11/2015 02:39:02 pm
The black beams in the ceilings,deep banks and snaked through the woods .
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Basharat and Sanaa
18/11/2015 02:39:38 pm
My favourite phrase is my hand trembled with fear .
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Maryam
18/11/2015 02:40:30 pm
Iv'e got a sentence:
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:42:19 pm
Did you make this up, or is it from an actual horror book? It's fantastic!
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Maryam
18/11/2015 02:44:59 pm
I made it up! Thank you.😀😀😀
Miss Patel
19/11/2015 09:09:37 am
Good use of a range of sentences to create tension and suspense. Well done! Can you add a metaphor or simile?
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Saihaan
18/11/2015 02:40:53 pm
My favourite phrase was"snaked through the woods."
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:41:56 pm
It's a great phrase.
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Saihaan
24/11/2015 11:55:32 am
The word snaked tells me that he was scared so he moved quickly and looking around checking what is going on.
Houd
18/11/2015 02:42:33 pm
I gasped as I saw a layer of dust on a horrifying skull.
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Gunay
18/11/2015 02:42:46 pm
He Trembled to the ground as he fell unconscious from the terrors of the house
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:44:05 pm
Spookeriffic!
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Hannah
18/11/2015 02:43:00 pm
I can't wait to do our BIG WRITE because we are writing about a horror story I have wrote down many phrases but 1 of them is:
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:44:37 pm
I'm glad you're looking forward to it! Please use that sentence, it's great!
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Shahzad
18/11/2015 02:43:00 pm
There was a layer of dust on the historic and blooded skull
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:44:50 pm
Chilling!
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Fatima
18/11/2015 02:43:29 pm
My best phrases are snaked through the wood ,thick soft,dark forest,and slow brown water.
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:48:16 pm
Creepy!
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Samir
18/11/2015 02:43:44 pm
Deep in the house lays a monster undiscovered hungry sharp clawed.
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:46:03 pm
Sent a shiver down my spine...
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Zainab
18/11/2015 02:44:20 pm
I don't know if this is spooky but when I walked up the stairs I heard creaks and moans even screams. when I reached the top of the stairs I had a spine chilling feeling. I began walking when I bumped into a little box. when I looked closely it sucked me in like a Hoover.
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:48:04 pm
Very spooky indeed. But your simile at the end is more funny than scary! Maybe think of a more haunting one...
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Houd
18/11/2015 02:44:44 pm
I heard a haunted echo as I turned around.
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:47:33 pm
With trepidation, I cautiously turned around...
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Shahzad
18/11/2015 02:46:54 pm
The blood drips down onto the gruesome and deadly king cobra which was covered in red emerald blood
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:49:38 pm
Yikes!
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Sanaa
18/11/2015 02:47:51 pm
I have a good fearing about my big write tomorrow 👿
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:50:08 pm
Me too!! Show off all of your horror skills!
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Samir
18/11/2015 02:48:24 pm
As a look inside the tall house a see scratched walls broken bed I would definitely would not go in there :0
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Mr Sharrock
18/11/2015 02:49:22 pm
Run away!
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Sanaa
18/11/2015 02:51:02 pm
I am going to set mine in a spooky mansion. Ooooohh👻
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Sanaa
18/11/2015 02:52:23 pm
I am going to blow your mind sir with my big write.
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Sanaa
18/11/2015 02:54:33 pm
I can't wait I am so excited
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Samir
18/11/2015 02:58:09 pm
As a look in the distance I could see a house in the middle of the street looks empty but then I hear loud screaming...
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Danyal
18/11/2015 03:03:20 pm
My best phrase is : unexpectedly the hideous and innocent clown slaughtered the cute,shy boy because he asked for one lolly
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Mr Sharrock
21/11/2015 02:14:36 pm
Brilliantly horrific, Danyal!
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Madiha
18/11/2015 07:41:00 pm
The trees were guards. The black, cloudy sky gave a shiver. And there. There it was. Standing like it had a mind of its own. The haunted house of Bolton. The windows were cracked and scratched, roof tiles were broken, then suddenly I saw a leg dangling down from a window...
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Mr Sharrock
21/11/2015 02:14:12 pm
Yikes! That mental image will keep me awake at night!
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Basharat
19/11/2015 07:47:30 pm
Today I really In joyed my big write because it was fun and exited.
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Mr Sharrock
21/11/2015 02:15:16 pm
I am very glad you enjoyed it. Very exciting indeed.
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Saihaan and Houd
24/11/2015 11:50:02 am
We really enjoyed our big write because we got to do a spooky one and we got to do whatever scary phrases we wanted to do.
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Uzair
24/11/2015 07:23:58 pm
I think this is better than doing our own stories.
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