Rayhaan
13/4/2016 02:23:43 pm
I learnt about ly openers like speedily cousasly and lots more
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Abid
13/4/2016 02:35:01 pm
Where's your full stop?
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abdullah
14/4/2016 10:30:51 am
You need a full stop at the end
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Ibraheem
13/4/2016 02:25:01 pm
This is a word to create suspense suddenly
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Arian
13/4/2016 02:33:43 pm
Ibraheem have you used a full stop.
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Ibraheem
13/4/2016 02:43:04 pm
Sorry Arian and Abid.
Rayhaan
14/4/2016 10:28:33 am
It is haunted as a gloomy ... As a forest. This is ellipsise.
Arian
13/4/2016 02:41:35 pm
Ibraheem does your sentence make sense.
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Arian
13/4/2016 02:29:58 pm
Terrifyingly the boy shreaked when the door creaked open.
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Abid
13/4/2016 02:31:31 pm
Is this a fronted adverbial?
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Minaal
13/4/2016 02:39:52 pm
This is a very good fronted adverbial
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Hajira
13/4/2016 02:30:26 pm
I leaned how to use ly opener which is suddenly .
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Minaal
13/4/2016 02:36:30 pm
Can you give me an example of a ly opener?
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Aisha
13/4/2016 02:31:58 pm
Cautiously,Freya stood outside the cave in fear not knowing what to do.
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Tayyab
13/4/2016 02:32:09 pm
From the shadows, a mysterious figure crawled up to Tom.
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Amaan
13/4/2016 02:33:16 pm
I learnt fronted adverbial so for suspense.
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Minaal
13/4/2016 02:34:43 pm
Without warning ,the boy fell into the rusty old page of a book.
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Jazmine
13/4/2016 02:35:29 pm
I have learned how to use ly openers like surprisingly, unexpectedly.
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Hasan
13/4/2016 02:37:35 pm
In a blink of an eye,a mysterious figure crawled up to a Miniminter.
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Aisha
13/4/2016 02:37:36 pm
From the shadows,Freya saw 4 goblins.
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Muhammad
13/4/2016 02:38:41 pm
Freya,who was petrified shook like a leaf on a tree.
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Muhammad
13/4/2016 02:39:18 pm
Ibrahim you forgot a full stop.
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Aliya
13/4/2016 02:39:31 pm
In a heart stopping moment,Freya got shocked when she saw the charming necklace.
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Ledwan
13/4/2016 02:40:21 pm
All of a sudden Freya was shoked by the goblins
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Tayyab
13/4/2016 02:42:27 pm
Led wan use a fulll stop.
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Muhammad
13/4/2016 02:43:11 pm
Ledwan you forgot a full stop.
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Raihan
13/4/2016 02:43:24 pm
Ledwan you need to yous a full stop
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Aliya
13/4/2016 02:43:56 pm
All of a sudden,it started to rain whilst Freya was walking happily searching for a beautiful necklace.
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Muhammad
13/4/2016 02:44:01 pm
Ledwan after All of a sudden you should have a comma.
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Abid
13/4/2016 02:45:12 pm
Have you forgot your full stop?
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Patrick
13/4/2016 02:45:26 pm
I learnt about lots of different words
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Minaal
13/4/2016 02:52:12 pm
That's very good
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Aliya
13/4/2016 02:46:08 pm
In the far distance ,Freya could hear creepy whispers.
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Hajira
13/4/2016 02:46:22 pm
Thanks Miss Jolly to gave us really good work
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Abid
13/4/2016 02:47:29 pm
Feeling perculiar I walked through the woods.
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Fatima
13/4/2016 02:47:53 pm
In a heart stopping moment,Freaya saw a huge slimy goblin.
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Amaan
14/4/2016 10:31:14 am
Fatima you should do ...
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Amaan
13/4/2016 02:48:14 pm
I learnt other fronted adevirbials for example, Freya walked , into the fearfull and spine chilling.
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Rayhaan
13/4/2016 02:48:34 pm
Ledwan where is your full stop
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Ayesha
13/4/2016 02:48:47 pm
Amazingly, Freya saw a wavy, fantastic necklace however it was bueatiful !
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Abid
13/4/2016 02:48:55 pm
I forgot my comma.
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Muhammad
13/4/2016 02:49:01 pm
Abid you forgot a comma.
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abdullah
13/4/2016 02:50:29 pm
all of a student ,frayhe had a dilemma of the goblins
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Minaal
13/4/2016 02:50:35 pm
In a dillema story ,there is lots of suspense.
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Hajira
13/4/2016 02:51:17 pm
I have learnt which word are ly opener
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Raihan
13/4/2016 02:51:25 pm
I leant about fronted adverbial for suspense.
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Hasan 1
13/4/2016 02:51:32 pm
Without hesitation,behind Freya was this weird looking figure I was gobsmaked
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Tayyab
14/4/2016 10:30:59 am
Hasan you forgot your full stop.
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Aisha
13/4/2016 02:51:53 pm
All of a sudden, the goblins quickly turned round to see her.
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Ayesha
13/4/2016 02:52:33 pm
Arian you need to put a comma on terryfiyingly
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Rahimah
13/4/2016 02:59:19 pm
Cautiously, Peter ,who was a courageous in addition daring boy peered through the creaky door,as he heard a deafening cry.
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Minaal
14/4/2016 10:30:18 am
Rahimah ,this is very good
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Muhammad
13/4/2016 08:00:46 pm
Abdullah you need a capital letter for your name.
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Muhammad
13/4/2016 08:01:26 pm
Hajira you need a full stop.
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Muhammad
13/4/2016 08:02:48 pm
Hasan 1 you need a full stop.
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Ibraheem
14/4/2016 10:25:24 am
You can use ellipses to create suspense.
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Muhammad
14/4/2016 10:25:38 am
I can understand ellipses by the help of my work.
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Minaal
14/4/2016 10:25:45 am
I have learnt about elipses.An example is "The price is ... big sloppy kiss!"
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Fatima
14/4/2016 10:26:40 am
When Freya saw the goblins...she screamed.
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Muhammad
14/4/2016 10:26:53 am
This is my example
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Minaal
14/4/2016 10:27:20 am
Elipses is three dots that create suspense.
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Jazmine
14/4/2016 10:27:41 am
I learn how to use ellipses like the girl ran away from the...monster.
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Abid
14/4/2016 10:28:03 am
I have learnt how to use ellipses properly for example Freya heard a strange noise ...the sound of hammers.
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Amaan
14/4/2016 10:28:10 am
I learnt how to use and understand . . . correctly
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Tayyab
14/4/2016 10:28:43 am
I have learnt how to understand and use ellipses an example is and then...Freya heard a strange noise.
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Ayesha
14/4/2016 10:28:50 am
Freya heard a strange noise ... the sound of hammeres
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Jawaria
14/4/2016 10:29:03 am
The girl herd strang creek
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abdullah
14/4/2016 10:29:10 am
It looks like a dilemma for freyer
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Mehnaz
14/4/2016 10:29:16 am
The girl heard a strange noise... She didn't know what to do.
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Muhammad
14/4/2016 10:29:25 am
Amaan you need a full stop.
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Minaal
14/4/2016 10:29:30 am
Elipses are very good for use of suspense
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Fatima
14/4/2016 10:29:47 am
Freya heard a strange noise...the sound of hammers.
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Arian
14/4/2016 10:30:00 am
The boy shreaked ...when a murky room appeared.
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Muhammad
14/4/2016 10:30:24 am
Ayesha you need a full stop.
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Rahimah
14/4/2016 10:30:24 am
As Freya walked through the gloomy tunnel ... she heard a scream.
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Ibraheem
14/4/2016 10:30:30 am
You can use ellipses to create suspense like Freya saw the goblins...she screamed.
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Abil
14/4/2016 10:30:40 am
And then...Freya heard a strange noise.
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Ledwan
14/4/2016 10:30:46 am
Freya steped up to the shadow... Suddenly a goblin came
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Aisha
14/4/2016 10:31:07 am
I learnt ellipses,eclipses create suspense.
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Hasan 1
14/4/2016 10:31:22 am
I understand ellipses, I will show an example
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Minaal
14/4/2016 10:31:28 am
I learnt how to use elipses correctly.
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Ayesha
14/4/2016 10:32:30 am
Suddenly, the goblins ran ... straight towards Freya .
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Muhammad
15/4/2016 07:26:46 am
Rayhaan you need a full stop.
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Muhammad
15/4/2016 07:28:37 am
Ledwan you need a full stop.
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Muhammad
15/4/2016 07:29:36 am
Abid I think you've spelt your name wrong.
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Muhammad
15/4/2016 07:30:24 am
Abdullah you've done the wrong spelling for Freya.
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Muhammad
18/4/2016 04:42:59 pm
Rayhaan is that Wright spelling.
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Muhammad
18/4/2016 04:43:34 pm
I am sorry for putting the capital letter in the middle of the sentence.
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Muhammad
18/4/2016 04:44:08 pm
Rayhaan does that make sense.
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Muhammad
18/4/2016 04:45:24 pm
Abdullah you need a capital letter for your name.
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Muhammad
18/4/2016 04:46:09 pm
Abdullah you need a full stop.
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Muhammad
18/4/2016 04:47:02 pm
Hajira you need a full stop.
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Muhammad
18/4/2016 07:37:02 pm
Hasan 1 that is a brilliant phrase with ellipses.
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