Remember about our year 2 targets... we need to use adjectives, similes, alliteration and adverbs!
Why don't you comment below with a fantastic descriptive sentence that you can use in your story this week...
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This week we have started to plan our adventure stories which will be set under the sea.
Remember about our year 2 targets... we need to use adjectives, similes, alliteration and adverbs! Why don't you comment below with a fantastic descriptive sentence that you can use in your story this week...
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Mischa
10/5/2016 04:47:31 pm
The shimmering sea was swishing threw a spectacliar storm but the lightening did not get to the sparkling sea!
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Abdurrahman
10/5/2016 07:56:56 pm
No humans can breath under water without a sea
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fatimah
13/5/2016 09:56:15 pm
the sea is very pritty
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Miss Witham
14/5/2016 10:54:58 am
Well 2LW...I have to say...your stories are AMAZING!!! Well done for all of your hard work this week! I am really enjoying reading your super stories! :)
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Maliykah
20/5/2016 01:51:37 pm
The shimmering sea is as sparkly as a rainbow
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Ibrahim
20/5/2016 01:53:46 pm
I love it when we were doing our story's because it was fun
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Safina
20/5/2016 01:53:52 pm
The angel fish are as bright as the shining sun
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Abdurrahman,Talah and Madina
20/5/2016 01:56:14 pm
I liked the movie we watched
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Amaan
20/5/2016 01:59:09 pm
It was fun when we were writting a story becaus we got to draw our front covers it was brilliant
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Rayyan
20/5/2016 01:59:31 pm
I liked when nemo got lost in the movie
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Abubakr Asif
20/5/2016 02:03:39 pm
I like the story's because we got to watch finding Nemo
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Aliyyah
20/5/2016 02:08:10 pm
Nemo is an of clown fish
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Abdulrahman
20/5/2016 02:09:01 pm
I liked writing a recreation of finding nemo
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Safina
20/5/2016 02:09:36 pm
I love writing stories about the finding nemo because the movie is so good that I always watch finding Nemo at home
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Aaminah
20/5/2016 02:14:30 pm
I like it when nemow gets lost in the move and when nemo loves
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aliyyah
20/5/2016 08:47:11 pm
i lice the part when nemo went lost in the deep sea.
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Mischa
21/5/2016 10:38:53 am
My story was about a angel fish and a seahorse going to a shimmering castle and they had a magical crown. My enemy was a jellyfish called Rohan. All of my characters are called Coral (a angel fish) and Burnt Flower (a seahorse). My favourite part of my story was when Coral shone the crown on Rohan. The whole point of the story was to show everyone what a great angel fish Coral is.
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Fatimah
24/5/2016 08:47:56 pm
Thank you miss witham
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Abdurrahman
28/5/2016 03:12:27 pm
Sharks live far far away in the deep dark oceon.
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